ruguorangnizhonghuiyicizhongkao,zhongkaozuowentimushishuoshuowozijihuozheshishuoshuowodexinlihua,nihuicongnafangmianrushouxieni?zenmexiechuyipianhaodewenzhangni?jintian huazhenxiaobian jiangjiangzhongkao《shuoshuowoziji》zuowentimujiexijijiazuodianping。
一、说说我的心里话作文
《shuoshuowodexinlihua》:mama,youxiexinlihuawoxiangduinishuoyijinghenjiule,wojiujiezheipianwenzhangduinishuoshuowodexinlihuaba。lianaibeifenshou?qinglukanke?
mama,wozhidaoninhenguanxinwoheaihuwo,danwoyijingzhangdale。jideyouyici,womenbanzhurenjiaowomenmeigetongxuedoudailiangpenpenzaihuilaizuoshiyan。dangwowogaogaoxingxingdipaohuijianapenzaishi,ninyilianbugaoxingdiduiwoshuo:“niqianwanbiena,rangwolaibangnina,nishenmeyebuyongban。”wowangrandepaozoule。ninneitianwanshangwenwoshibushibuxinrenninnengbangwocaipaozoude。woshuo:“mamawozhangdale,woxiangzijiquzuowonengzuodeshi,yinweiwoyijingzhangdale。”nintingdaohoumanyidixiaole。xiexieninjileyigexuehuichengzhangdejihui。
lingwaiwohaixiangduinishuo,wonengchulizijideshiqinghedangnidexiaozhushou。jialiyaoshixuyaoqingjie,gandianjiawushenmede,zhiyaowonengzuode,nindouyinggaifangshourangwogan,yinweiwoyeshijialideyiyuan,youyiwuchengdanjialidejiawuhuo。
二、说说我自己作文解析
《shuoshuowoziji》zheigetimunandubuda,danshinanyichucai。qinianjiyuwenshangcekebendiyidanyuandezuowentimushi“zheijiushiwo”,qishihezheigetimuyiyang。jideneicirangxueshengxie“zheijiushiwo”zheigetimushi,xueshengdezuowenkaitoujihudoushicongwodexingminghenianlingxieqi,quefayidingdeliangdian。ruguokaochangshangyezheiyangxie,yuejuanlaoshimeitiankanjibaipianchabuduodewenzhang,dingyouweitongjiaolazhigan。
nadaozheigeshuoshuowozijizuowenti,shouxianyinggaimingquezheishiyipianxierendewenzhang;qicizhuyiyaoxiechuwodetedian,yaozhangxianwodegexing;xierendewenzhanglibukaijishi,xiezuozhongyaoxuanqudianxingcailiaolaibiaoxianwodetedian。
“shuoshuowoziji”yingzheyanyuwobenren,congwaimao、xingge、aihaodengfangmianduojiaodubiaoxianziji;yekeyizhuazhuzijimouyifangmiandetedianlaixie。yingzhuyibiaoxianzijiyuzhongbutongdedifang;zaitongguoyijianhuojijianshilaibiaoxianzijidetedian,jixiejuti——zhongkaozuowenyaoqiuneirongchongshi,suoyixushijutihenzhongyao。xushizhongbunenghulvemiaoxie,zheiyangneirongcaihuishengdong。
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